She had agreed to the rules, so why she had then made the choice not to follow them she didn’t know. She had a reason of course, she always did, but that was not the way it worked. Reasons after the event were too late.
It came down to the fact that she had agreed ro wearing no underwear that week, so making an exception for coffee on Friday with the book group girls, just because you could see her nipples through the top, was not acceptable and she knew it. She could have chosen an item of clothing that worked better but now here she was. No choice.
Not only had she disappointed him in allowing him the full access to seeing the shape and outline of her body through her clothes as agreed. In making the choice to break the agreement she had disrespected his position, going against his wishes and desires.
By the time she saw what he had selected for her to wear on Saturday she was quite repentant but her lesson would have this final part nonetheless. The very short shorts, the sheer top that meant her nipples and breasts could be seen through the material, she was very much his to display as he chose.
Once she got over her initial fear as they walked into the restaurant, she actually began to feel the sense of freedom that being his brought. Not only that, she clung to him as surprised faces watched and raised a brow, for he was her safety and her protector as well as her teacher.
This was a lesson she would not forget. She was his by choice and she knew what that meant in terms of the choices she had, when she could choose to make them, and when not to.
300 words
I mentioned last week that I was enjoying my Saturday shorts and might make it a thing. Many of you were positive about that in the comments and so I have decided to go ahead. It’s not a meme as such but if you want to join in and do your own Saturday Short then please just leave your link in the comments to my post and I will come and visit yours. Feel free to use the badge and link back to my Saturday Shorts category.
While writing short fiction is not for everyone, it does mean a focus on the words you choose. Writing should be as short as possible in order to tell your story so I am limiting myself to between 100 and 300 words, using increments of 50 only in order to force some additional discipline! The stimulus for my piece each week will come from a picture.
To read more posts, click the badge or follow the link to my Saturday Shorts category.
I have also added my post to the projects below so why not hit the badge to find out more:
“She had agreed to the rules, so why she had then made the choice not to follow them she didn’t know. She had a reason of course, she always did, but that was not the way it worked. Reasons after the event were too late.”
So true! Nothing is more effective than a punishment that suits the crime.
willie
I LOVE with it fits the crime. It feel so clever and you feel so seen and understood. X
I’m glad you decided to go ahead, you look very cute in those shorts and socks
Thank you x
It’s amazing how quickly 300 words fly by when you’re enjoying them.
Thank you x
I’m loving these bite size pieces 👄
lilly
Thank you Lilly. They are about my size lol x
Very enjoyable – well done!
Thank you x
Absolutely loved, “Not only that, she clung to him as surprised faces watched and raised a brow, for he was her safety and her protector as well as her teacher.” Great post, missy!
Thank you Nora x
First of all, I love the image you have created here, of her on his arm in that restaurant, and all the glances. Brilliant and sexy. Love your image too!
And, you knew I would take you up on your offer for Saturday Shorts, right? Here’s mine: https://rebelsnotes.com/2021/03/silly-cocky-kiss/
~ Marie xox
Yippee. Thank you so much for adding yours. Off to read it now …..
Every thing about these images is sexy. But mostly these shorts. And I love writing short stories based on a photo prompt. Maybe I should write one about these sexy shots?
Oooo. Not that would be exciting! Missy x
I’ve already professed my love for your flash fiction pieces, but this one hits so many things. Knowing that disappointment, being scared, but brave at His side. Being displayed in public, having the clothing chosen. Very Mmm indeed!
Also love your Saturday shorts prompt idea and badge. I don’t have a lot of short fiction because I’m just figuring out how to simplify my writing (I have wonderful coaches and inspiration) but I do have a shorts post!
https://lifeofakinkywife.com/bet-on-it/
🙂
Thank you and I am glad that you liked it. Yours is fun too. We have sort of forgotten to do things like that this past while. Inspiration needed. Missy x
Love this 💛
Iris
Thank you Iris x
Loved reading this. Says so much in so few words ♥️
Thank you so much Hana x
I loved this, as I could feel it with the protagonist: ‘Once she got over her initial fear as they walked into the restaurant, she actually began to feel the sense of freedom that being his brought.’
Thank you Liz. I love that comment. X
The shorts are cool. They look great.
Thank you 😊
Oo I would love this story to be real, deff presses my buttons. Your pictures are very sexy Missy, your bottom in those shorts is utterly devine!
Ah thanks gem. And real would be exciting although in a terrifying way. x
You look great in shorts Missy! You should wear them into school one day 😉
xx
Omg I can see the horrified faces now. They were one of my bargains! Thank you x
Wow, that was a powerful piece of writing. You captured the essence of the submissive incredibly well. Strong work.
Thank you David. What a lovely comment x
Sometimes less is more! I’m loving your flash fiction—and wishing I was there to see her…
Thank you. That means a lot to me x