Continuing with my Saturday shorts theme, I have another snapshot put to words. I am wondering if I should make this a thing as I am really quite enjoying it.
They had been taking pictures for a while. She was nervous to begin with as she didn’t know Mackay very well but had relaxed into it, the fear and excitement giving way to freedom and escape.
She picked up the umbrella and turned around, pushing her bum out at them in a flirtatious way. She twirled and laughed as Mackay snapped away. No longer directed, she gave them what the mood had created in her. She felt strong, playful and desired.
She hadn’t forgotten the way things could change although it hit her, a shock which seized her in both a physical and mental sense.
“She is lovely isn’t she? Do you still want to try her out?”
She waited, paralysed in the moment, as if holding her breath. The silence focussed her on them, her thoughts temporarily suspended.
“Certainly HL. That bottom is just crying out for some attention.”
If you enjoyed Snapshot then you might want to read some more of my Saturday Shorts:
Mmmm indeed! (To the bottom, the headspace you describe and the final, breath catching offer from HL)
Thank you! I am so pleased that it worked for you x
Fantastic xx yes you should continue to write them xx purely selfish as I enjoy reading them
Yay. Thank you RM! x
You should certainly continue your snapshots. Written and with photographs. I love it when all of my senses are attacked so quickly.
Oooo that is a lovely comment. Thank you. You have really encouraged me. Missy x
white ribs black tassels
hidden shadows spinning depths
missing red between
❤️
Oh I want to know what happens next ? What a tease 😍
lilly
Hehe. A tease is always good Lilly! x
Oh my! What is going to happen next????
Now that would be telling. Though I do have an idea or two! x
Oh yes, hot! And the image is stunning, Missy. I would love if you continue with your Saturday shorts! Am really enjoying them 🙂
~ Marie xox
Thank you. I think that I will. And maybe do something more with them! x
Such a cute photo, make this a thing!!
Yay. Ok! x
YES to taking something you enjoy doing and making it “a thing.” 🙂
This is a super fun photo — love the umbrella! It’s a delightful prop. 🙂
Thank you. HL likes to use things for light so we were trying out the umbrella and it just sort of led to a bit of fun. Missy x
Wow I absolutely love this image and I think it works so well in mono. I really enjoyed your snapshot, certainly an offer to take up.
Thank you gem. I am glad that you liked the mono version. I had to really crop too much off for my liking but they work quite well together. Missy x
I love this image, especially in monochrome! Very artistic.
Your flash makes me wonder if this was a real scenario. I really enjoyed thinking it was perhaps a bit of fantasy and then being brought to the real and present with the addition of HL.
Loving the Saturday shorts!
There is always a lot of real in them but sometimes it lets me take an extra step. Thank you also for your kind words. Missy x
Great fantasy. This dialogue is especially impressive. Well, white on white is also expensive.
Love the image – particularly in mono
Another great Flash too
May xx
Thank you. The mono seems to have been most popular this week. x
Great mage
Lovely bum
Beautiful use of a few words
Made me go mmmmmm
Thank you x
A few slaps wouldn’t do any real harm would it? 😉 Xx
It would be rude not to lol x