Red. He wanted red.
Ready in red.
Kneeling down, bum on heels,
Legs apart.
Further apart.
Stop.
No, further again.
Too much? No, not too much.
Carefully. Both the same.
Perfect.
Breathe. Remember to breathe.
Back straight.
Don’t slouch.
Breathe. Calm. Breathe again.
Waiting.
Chin down, eyes cast low. Don’t look.
Don’t look at all.
Just breathe.
Hands. Forgot the hands.
Cup the breasts, display them, display them.
Ready. Waiting. Breathing.
Waiting. Breathing. Ready.
I am Yours.
I am Yours.
I am Yours.
Wanting, needing,
still breathing, still waiting.
Yours.
I am ready. I am ready for you.
Take me.
(100 words)
The gorgeous image above is by Tom Starling and is used with permission for Friday Flash.
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Now that will put you in the right headspace!!
It certainly would ?
Lovely ?
Thank you sweet ?
I like the urgency in this, the feelings.Wonderful moments captured in 100 words!
Rebel xox
Thanks Marie. It was just an experiment really as I saw the picture and loved it! 🙂
Oh, delicious. It’s like you’re drawing the reader into that subspace with your words. Lovely ?
Thank you jupiter – I am really glad that it worked like that 🙂
great little red flash here Missy! I liked it very much x
Thanks May. I saw your post with the picture and wanted to use it. 🙂
it is such a great image – Tom Sterling is a talent for sure x
He is. I would love to be able to do that ?
Love how fast an furious this feels. It suits the prompt perfectly too!
Oh wow thank you ?
Beautiful writing. I hope to refind this kind of headspace one day
Mollyx
Thank you and I am sure that you will ?